You must make the readers understand the importance of the cause and why you need their help. Grab their attention immediately and maintain it throughout. An emotional appeal will help.
1. Attract the reader's attention by giving an interesting statistic, posing a question, stating an example, or illustrating the issue at hand with a story.
- Picture a hot summer day, just a year after World War II. John has invited his friend Eric over to play ball, but Eric's mother won't allow her son to go. The risk of catching polio is too great and too frightening.
- Every twelve seconds in the United States, one more woman is battered--at home.
- Every year thousands of children have nothing special for Christmas. No tree, no gifts, no Christmas meal with smiling faces surrounding the table.
- We live in such an "advanced" country that we generally do not see those who are struggling to keep up. It may come as a surprise to you that even in our community hundreds of adults are functionally illiterate.
- Countless studies show that good nutrition combined with regular exercise is the best way to increase the quality and length of your life. But as a new mother, you are facing physical challenges and time constraints, making it difficult for you to get back into shape and lose those baby pounds.
- a constant deterioration in
- a remarkable number of
- did you know that
- evidence shows that
- future generations will look back
- have you ever wished that you could
- history tells us that
- how would you like to
- in every community throughout
- is there any solution to
- is happening in your neighborhood
- latest statistics show
- recent studies have found
- risk is increasing every
- there are thousands of
- there is a little girl who
- those who suffer from
- threaten the fabric of society
- to change the world
- what can anyone do about
- with every passing minute
- would you like to know more about
2. Give the reader necessary facts and information
- With the polio vaccine, our children don't have to face such fears, thanks to medical research by dedicated professionals like those at the Doe Medical Institute. Our researchers are continually discovering new information that will help develop cures for many of the diseases plaguing us today.
- A surprising number of these domestic violence situations remain hidden for years, locked behind doors of secrecy. Fortunately, more and more women are finding the courage to speak up and get help from organizations like the Women's Crisis House. At the Crisis House we give battered women and their children shelter, and help them find ways to rebuild their lives.
- Many of these children live in abject poverty, and there's simply no money for a turkey, let alone a tree or gifts. All of them need to feel the Christmas spirit, just as we do.
- Some of these adults can read on a first grade level; most cannot read at all. There are many reasons why they never learned to read, and just as many problems because they can't. Simple daily tasks--such as reading instructions or warning labels--can be very difficult or even dangerous for them. Simply stated, illiteracy limits every social, economic, and domestic aspect of a person's life.
- Now you have your chance. Doe Center for Human Performance Research has chosen you as a candidate to participate in a postpartum health and weight loss study. It involves approximately twenty-five women, who we will track through six months of exercise and nutritional training. The details of the study and what you will be doing if your participate are on the enclosed sheet.
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3. State your request.
- Unfortunately, the Institute cannot run without help, and it needs yours. For a small donation of just $17 each month, you can make a big difference in our cancer and AIDS research.
- Of course running a shelter like ours costs money, and the more women and children we help, the more money we need. But through generous contributions from people like you, we have managed to help women and children in need for almost five years now. With your help, we hope to continue for many years to come.
- As hopeless as it seems, there is something you can do. You can donate supplies, time, or money to help a needy child or family.
- But there is hope! Adults can learn to read through volunteer tutor programs like the one at the public library. Our program opens a new world of independence for many people, but we need more volunteers to meet the demand. That's why we are asking for your help. We need tutors who can help for at least four hours per week. You can set your own schedule.
- You can be an important part of our study, which we hope will yield information to help future mothers.
- appeal to your generosity
- are many ways to help
- ask you to help us by
- by donating a little of your time
- can provide the necessary link
- cannot do it without your
- cannot survive without your
- even a small donation will
- it takes so little to
- make a difference
- need your help
- need what only you can give
- please care enough to
- share in the rewards by
- urge you to participate in
- will make a huge difference to
- will provide help for
- with the help of people like you
- with your help we can
- would appreciate any help you can offer
- your generosity can save a
- your spare change can provide
4. Explain what benefits will result.
- With your small monthly pledge (a tax deductible contribution), you will help us continue this crucial research. You will also receive our quarterly magazine featuring updates on the Institute's research programs.
- Aside from receiving a tax deduction for your donation, you will know that your money is funding an important cause. All our outside contributions are used for food, clothing, blankets, and incidentals like soap and toothpaste. You will have the satisfaction of knowing that, thanks to you, at least one more person has been helped in a crisis.
- Even a small donation can make one more child's Christmas a little brighter. Every donation makes a difference. Picture the glow in the children's faces as they wake up to the Christmas morning surprises you made possible.
- You will be amazed at the personal satisfaction you will receive through our "Learn to Read" program. You will witness the excitement in people's eyes when they finally comprehend the words on a printed page.
- As a participant, you will have free use of all our exercise and weight training equipment. You will also receive a free physical profile at the beginning and again at the end of the study. We are confident that at the end of the six-month period you will feel healthy and look great.
- a chance to serve your
- as a token of our gratitude
- beyond the borders of your community
- can make all the difference to
- every cent goes towards
- for your kindness to
- for your generosity
- know that your generosity will
- please accept our thanks for
- receive our gift in return for
- rewards go without saying
- smiles on the faces of those who you helped
- tax-deductible contribution
- this money will allow us to
- welcome donations of any type
- will have the satisfaction of knowing
- will receive in return
- will help us to continue
- will have the opportunity to
- would like to send you
- your donation will be used to
5. Make it easy for your reader to reply or act on your request.
- Simply complete the enclosed card and return it today with your check or your credit card information. Make your pledge today.
- All you need to do is return the enclosed envelope with a check or money order. Send it in today.
- There are many ways you can help. You can simply send us a check in the envelope provided. You may prefer to donate needed items (see the enclosed list). If you would like to sponsor a child or volunteer your time, simply call the number on the enclosed sheet.
- Call us today, and we will set up an appointment to get you started.
- Fill out the enclosed questionnaire and return it today. After we receive your questionnaire, we will contact you with more details.
- as soon as possible
- by sending your donation today
- call our toll-free number
- complete the information sheet
- complete the enclosed application
- easy three-step process
- enclose your donation in the postage-paid envelope
- fill out the pledge card
- for more information, please
- for a copy of our annual report, please
- if you have any questions
- if you prefer to remain anonymous
- it's so easy to
- just call in your pledge
- make your check out to
- or, if it would be easier
- put your check in the mail today
- we welcome your questions
- welcome checks or money orders
- write to us for further information
- your donation is tax deductible
6. Motivate your reader to act on your request. You may repeat the importance of the cause.
- Help us in our search for the causes of and cures for the disease. Your financial support will allow this vital medical research to continue. Send us your pledge today.
- If we could, we would run our shelter on love alone. But we must depend on contributions from caring people like you. Please help by giving.
- Remember, it takes people like you to make a difference in the lives of young people. Help them have a merry Christmas, too.
- You can make a significant difference in the life of an illiterate adult. By spending only four hours a week at your convenience, you can help change a person's life. We are doing all we can to solve this problem. Please be part of the solution.
- Please take this opportunity to participate in an important study.
- a gift to the future
- by working together we can
- extend a helping hand to
- give your support to
- give the gift of a lifetime
- help us to reach for the stars
- holidays aren't the only time for giving
- invest in their future
- it's time to repay part of the debt we owe to
- let's do our best to
- need to do all that we can
- opportunity to serve
- their smiles are the greatest reward
- to make the world a better place
- to make a better world for
- to benefit just one child
- together we can do it
- will open the doors to a better life
- will be saving lives
- your chance to participate in
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