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1. State all the relevant facts concerning the problem.
- We who own businesses on the 1400 to 1600 blocks of Second Street protest the rezoning of this section of the city. The construction that will result from the rezoning will make it very difficult to provide adequate parking for our patrons and employees.
- The proposed new runway at the local airport will place low-flying aircraft directly over our elementary school and the county hospital, both of which would be significantly affected by the frequent noise.
- During the past several months, the alley behind our apartment complex at 1600 Main Street has become a kind of old car graveyard.
- The restaurant next to my clothing store keeps throwing leftover food onto the hill directly behind us. The free meal, of course, attracts rodents and insects. This illegal practice presents a health risk for the entire neighborhood. I have brought this to the attention of the restaurant owner to no avail.
- As homeowners along the river, we are becoming increasingly concerned about the amount of trash we see floating in the river and the strong chemical smell that comes from the water.
- It seems that over the past few weeks the park behind our house has become a popular gathering spot for local gangs. Besides having to listen to loud rock music until late into the night, several of us have had our back yards vandalized. Last night our cat was the object of malicious behavior.
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2. Suggest any ideas you have for resolving the problem. Assure the reader that you will cooperate. You may wish to express your confidence that the problem can be resolved.
- We are sure that there must be a way to clean up the river and are willing to assist in the cleanup effort.
- We trust that the committee will reconsider their plans. If not, we will have to take this issue up with higher authorities. Surely we can find a satisfactory resolution to this problem.
- We realize that it may not be possible to completely eradicate the vandalism in the neighborhood, but we do ask that more police patrol this area, especially after dark. Our neighborhood watch committee will also increase its efforts.
- Please send us information on why our property taxes have been raised so much. We realize that the value of real estate in this area has risen sharply over the last few years, but we feel that the taxes on our homes are excessively high.
- We request that the speed limit on our street be reduced to 25 mph, because of the number of children who now live here.
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